literature

Insomnia

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Consciousness is such a burden,
When it is oblivion I seek,
The body begs for mercy,
But the mind is cruel,
Refusing me rest,
That simplest of pleasures,
I wish for a dream,
Even if it be a nightmare,
Like a vampire, I fear the sunrise,
Though the reasons are not the same,
Light in my window condemning me,
To lose another night,
My treacherous eyes betray me,
Seeking out the light,
My very bones scream out for respite,
And my innards have lost all hope,
I feel my strength fail me,
And pray my body won't fade away.
Another sleepless night... So I took my lumps of coal and made them diamonds...
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Edit: Improved flow by adding a few lines, planning to enter this in a contest...wish me luck dearies!
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Victory dearies! Victory!!! I mean yeah it's 2nd place, but I didn't think I'd even place!
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Craytato's avatar
This is good!! :D I like it! I know just how you feel :3 a pain really. . . . but yes yes~! a shame you couldnt sleep though :( sleep is wonderful when it comes and decides to stay :) Best of luck to you! :) And thanks for submitting ^^